Response to Han's "PowerPoint Articles Summary"

That is quite a good summary about the PowerPoint Hanniboy. You really did pick up a lot of detail and nice job with always listing the author of the article you read and also mentioning the name of the article in quotation marks. I like how you did not just put in extra useless words to make 300 words, instead you really wrote what you thought. The only thing I would say is that in the last sentence, it seemed that you still had a big portion to cover about the guy defending PowerPoint but you summarized in one sentence he made fun of PowerPoint. Maybe you could organize your paragraph to explain all things equally next time.